She did a great job of elaborating (adding detail to make her sentences more interesting).
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| What a fabulous sculpture Isabelle. |
Isabelle's Moment in Time Writing:
The Forest Adventure
I heard birds chirping in the fabulous creaking green trees.
I saw a huge decorated waterfalling dam.
I saw beautiful shimmering rocks on the glimmering river sand.
I felt the grass make my cold bare feet tingle like magic!
I wondered what our divine sanctuary will be like when it's definitely finished.
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